英文学术写作:如何使文章流畅(An approach to academic writing---FLOW)

流畅指的是从文章的一个观点到下一个观点的流畅转换,为了达到两个观点之间上下文衔接的顺畅我们首先需要确立清晰的连结逻辑。

连接词和连接段

功能 跟从句 跟全句 跟短语
附加 furthermore
in addition
moreover
in addition to
转折 although
even though
despite the fact
however
nevertheless
despite
in spite of
因果 because
since
therefore
as a result
consequently
hence
thus
because of
due to
as a result of
解释 in other words
that is
i.e.
对比 while
whereas
in contrast
however
on the other hand
conversely
unlike
举例 for example
for instance
升华 on the contrary
as a matter of fact
in fact

由旧的观点引出新的观点

主语或句子的前部分阐述的是已知的信息,句末部分提出新的信息。

举例:
Research has shown that caffeine does indeed reduce sleepiness and can lead to better academic performance since students can spend more time studying.Despite its effectiveness in counteracting sleepiness, caffeine can have a negative impact on subsequent sleep, which for many students mat already be compromised. Specifically, caffeinated beverages consumed near bedtime at night can prolong sleep onset and reduce sleep efficiency and depth, thus affecting both sleep quality and duration. Most of the research on how caffeine affects sleepiness/alertness has focused on coffee or no-doze pills. However, a new kind of caffeinated drink has become increasingly popular, namely functional energy drinks(FEDs). FEDs are marketed as products that can improve both mental and physical performance. In addition to containing caffeine, FEDs have other active ingredients such as taurine, glucose, and glucoronolactone. Exactly how these ingredients together affect alertness remains unclear.

重复:
同一词:caffeine
同义词:drink, beverage
词性:caffeine–>caffeinated
接龙:FEDs处上下两句为接龙处理

总结:
can prolong sleep onset and reduce sleep efficiency and depth, thus affecting both sleep quality and duration.Most of the research on how caffeine affects sleepiness/alertness

This加名词的使用与总结段

this/these可以用于新旧信息的承上启下连结。例如:

Writing instructors know that students need to understand the differences between formal and informal language.This understanding can help students make strategic choices in their writing.

In recent years, the number of students applying to PhD programs has increased steadily, while the number of places available has remained fairly constant. This situation has resulted in intense competition for admission.

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