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When it comes to the issue about what policy the government leaders need to take in order to make success, people's opinion differs from person to person, and culture to culture. Some prefer to develop agriculture, so that food price can cut down, while others may choose to boost real estate for some people really find it hard to get place to live in. On personal level, I support that government need to create job for unemployed workers in order to success.

 

It's true that food price is too high for some people that they cannot even live on with the government grant. It means that the unemployed citizens are faced with hungry every day. At the same time, some of them even steal for food. But is it a wise idea for cutting the food price in order to achieve prosperity? With the development of technology, the chances for creating more food per unit of land are very limited. So, all the effort may finally find in vain to cut down the food price.

 

What's more, boost real estate is not a reasonable idea either. At the moment, the real estate has already over-exploited by some rich business men. And the poor just find their wages are nearly to zero compare with the horrible price of the houses. The government may try take their responsible to keep the price accessible for some poor people, but this can be too difficult than it cannot finally finish with the real estate really a nice place to make a profit.

 

Finally, the importance of providing more job for citizens are quite obvious. Someone argue that the food price is high and the house are unaffordable just because they don't find the appropriate job. So even some of them have job. However, these jobs cannot show the gifted talent of some specific person, while the people who choose it, just cannot find the job they want due to the fact there are not enough jobs provided by the government or the firms. Additionally, some workers don't a decent job just because they lack some necessary skills for that kind of job. So, the government can also provide some lecture for those who need it.

 

In conclusion, create more jobs for unemployed workers can easy the problems related with food and houses. More importantly, it can foster the country's economy and thus make a peaceful and prosperous society.

 

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When it comes to the issue about what policy the government leaders need to take in order to make success, people's opinion differs from person to person, and culture to culture. Some prefer to develop agriculture, so that food price can cut down, while others may choose to boost real estate because lots of people don’t have a place to live in. In my opinion, I support that government need to create job for unemployed workers in order to success.

 

It's true that food price is too high even for the people who rely on government aid. It means that the unemployed citizens are faced with hungry every day. At the same time, some of them even steal for food. Is it a wise idea for cutting the food price in order to achieve prosperity? With the development of technology, the chances to create more food per unit of land are very limited. So, all the effort may finally find in vain to cut down the food price.

 

What's more, boost real estate is not a reasonable idea either. At the moment, the real estate has already been over-exploited by some rich business men. And the poor just find their wages are nearly to zero comparing with the horrible price of the houses. The government may try take their responsible to keep the price accessible for some poor people, but this can be too difficult that it cannot finally finish with the real estate really a nice place to make a profit.

 

Finally, the importance of providing more job for citizens are quite obvious. Someone argue that the food price is high and the house are unaffordable just because they can’t find an appropriate job. The government can promote the construction of basic infrastructure to create more jobs. At the same time, for those who don’t have job, they may lack some specific knowledge in the key process of the work, government can offer opportunities for these people to learn the basic work skill, such as videos directed by famous engineers to teach beginners every detail in producing a product. While others may have trouble to find the talent they have. For instance, a gifted pianist may don’t know his strength at first that he may have to work as a low-paid waiter. Attentions are also needed to pay, by the government, in order to help these people to find the work they are talented in.

 

In conclusion, create more jobs for unemployed workers can easy the problems related with food and houses. More importantly, it can foster the country's economy and thus make a peaceful and prosperous society.

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