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句子改错

一、

Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting than employer.

错误:可数名词不能裸奔,前加冠词(a,an,the)或者变为复数形式。

改: Employees  can get more benefits from telecommuting than employers.

句型分析:

  Employees :主语

  can get more benefits:谓语

  from telecommuting than employers:宾语

句中词汇积累:

employ  /ɪm'plɒɪ/ vt. 使用,采用;雇用;使忙于,使从事于  n. 使用;雇用 {

  employer    /ɪm'plɒɪə/  n. 雇主,老板

  employment    /ɪm'plɒɪm(ə)nt/   n. 就业;使用;职业;雇用

  employment rate  /reɪt/  就业率;雇用率;人力资源新进率

  unemployment   失业

  unemployment rate 失业率

}

telecommute    /,telɪkə'mjuːt/   vi. (利用电脑终端机)远距离工作;vt. (利用电脑终端机)远距离办公;过去式 telecommuted过去分词 telecommuted现在分词 telecommuting

benefit      /'benɪfɪt/    n. 利益,好处;救济金;vt. 有益于,对…有益;vi. 受益,得益

bene 表示 '好' 的前缀

二、

Work at home using modern technology, can greathy enhance our efficiency.

错误:动词不能直接做主语动词做主语需要加ing变形

改:Working at home using modern technology, can greathy enhance our efficiency.

句型分析:

  Working at home using modern technology:主语(动作的执行者)

  can greathy enhance:谓语{

    greathy:状语

    enhance:动词

  }

  our efficiency:宾语(动作的接受者/承受着)

句中词汇积累:

modern    /'mɒd(ə)n/   adj. 现代的,近代的;时髦的;n. 现代人;有思想的人;比较级 more modern最高级 most modern

technology    /tek'nɒlədʒɪ/   n. 技术;工艺;术语 ;复数 technologies

greatly    /'greɪtlɪ/  adv. 很,大大地;非常

enhance    /ɪn'hɑːns/   vt. 提高;加强;增加;过去式 enhanced;过去分词 enhanced;现在分词 enhancing

efficiency    /ɪ'fɪʃ(ə)nsɪ/    n. 效率;效能;功效;复数 efficiencies

三、

Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.

错误:be+过去分词 =被动语态

改:Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.

句型分析:

  Children :主语

  who are raised in impoverished families :定于从句(用来修饰主语)

  can generally deal with :谓语

   problems:宾语

  more effectively:状语

   in their adult years:时间状语

句中词汇积累:

 raise   /reɪz/    vt. 提高;筹集;养育;升起;vi. 上升;n. 高地;上升;加薪;n. (Raise)人名;(英)雷兹;过去式 raised;过去分词 raised;现在分词 raising

扩:I am born and raised in + 地名  在这句话中raise 是生长,土生土长的

impoverished    /ɪm'pɒvərɪʃt/   adj. 穷困的;用尽了的,无创造性的  v. 使贫困(impoverish的过去分词)

deal with 对付;处理

generally    /'dʒen(ə)rəlɪ/  adv. 通常;普遍地,一般地

problem    /'prɒbləm/   n. 难题;引起麻烦的人  ;adj. 成问题的;难处理的

more effectively   更有效地(effectively的比较级)

adult years  成年

四、

The problems that are created by enironmental contamination is very hard to resolve.

错误:主句谓语动词没有和主句保持一致,(主句是复数)

改:The problems that are created by enironmental contamination are very hard to resolve.

句型分析:

  The problems:主语

  that are created by enironmental contamination:定语从句(are created谓语)

  are:系动词(谓语)

  very hard to resolve:表语

句中词汇积累:

create  /kriː'eɪt/   vt. 创造,创作;造成 ;过去式 created过去分词 created现在分词 creating

enironmental  环境

contamination    /kən,tæmɪ'neɪʃən/   n. 污染,玷污;污染物

hard     /hɑːd/   adj. 努力的;硬的;困难的;辛苦的;确实的;严厉的;猛烈的;冷酷无情的;adv. 努力地;困难地;辛苦地;接近地;猛烈地;牢固地

resolve     /rɪ'zɒlv/    vt. 决定;溶解;使…分解;决心要做…;vi. 解决;决心;分解;n. 坚决;决定要做的事;过去式 resolved;过去分词 resolved;现在分词 resolving

五、

Many students are like studying economics.

错误:like 当喜欢的意思时前面不能加be动词

改:Many students are like studying economics.

句型分析:

  Many students:主语

  like: 谓语

   studying economics:宾语

句中词汇积累:

economic   /,iːkə'nɒmɪk/    adj. 经济的,经济上的;经济学的   比较级 more economic最高级 most economic

like    /laɪk/    vt. 喜欢;想;愿意;vi. 喜欢;希望;prep. 像;如同;adj. 同样的;相似的;n. 爱好;同样的人或物;adv. 可能;conj. 好像;过去式 liked;过去分词 liked;现在分词 liking

扩:You are like your mother.

like是介词'像'的时候前面必须加be动词  

可数名词

有单数和复数两种形式。指一个人或一件事物时,用单数形式;指两个或多个人或事物时用复数形式。名词由单数形式变成复数形式的规则如下:
可数名词复数的规则变化:
1. 一般的名词词尾直接加-s 。如:
book → books room → rooms pear→pears
house → houses day → days song→songs
2. 以s, x, ch, sh结尾的名词,在词尾加-es 。如:
bus → buses box → boxes
watch → watches dish → dishes
3. 以"辅音字母+y"结尾的名词,要先将y改为i再加-es。如:
city → cities body → bodies story→stories
factory → factories
4. 以o结尾的名词,通常有生命的加es无生命的加s。如:
Negroes and heroes like eating tomatoes and potatoes.黑人英雄爱吃土豆西红柿。
无生命:piano→ pianos radio→radios
有生命:potato→potatoes
5.以f 或fe 结尾的名词,要将f或fe改为v再加-es。如:
half → halves leaf → leaves
knife → knives wife → wives
 
可数名词复数的不规则变化:
男人女人a变e, man→men woman→women
鹅足牙oo变ee, goose→geese foot→feet tooth→teeth
老鼠虱子也好记,ous变ic, mouse→mice louse→lice
孩子加上ren,鱼鹿绵羊不用变。 child→children fish→fish deer→deer sheep→sheep
 

不可数名词

1.不可数名词没有复数,当它作句子的主语时,谓语动词要用单数形式 。
如:The food is very fresh. 食品很新鲜。
2. 有的不可数名词也可以作可数名词,有复数形式,但他们的意义往往发生变化。
如:water (水) → waters (水域)
orange (橘汁) → oranges (橘子)
3. 很多的不可数名词表示泛指时为不可数,表示种类时就可数,但意义大多不发生变化。
如:fruit → fruits food → foods
fish → fishes hair → hairs
最常见的不可数名词有:baggage, change(零钱), furniture, hair, homework, information, knowledge, luggage, money, news, progress, traffic ,beef,mutton,broccoli,orange(橘子,橘子汁,橙色)
其它不可数名词还有:absence, age, anger, bread,courage, energy, equipment, experience, failure, fear, food, fun, health, ice, industry, kindness, labour, luck, marriage, music, nature, paper, peace, pleasure, power, pride, rain, research, respect, safety, salt, sand, silence, sleep, strength, snow, technology, time, trade, transport, travel, trust, truth, waste, water, wealth, weather, wind, work(工作)
 
 

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