[ChatGPT] Use ChatGPT and Tongyi Qianwen to write Chinese composition for the 2023 college entrance examination——National A-volume

Question content   
Read the material below and write as required. (60 points)   
People can better control time due to technological development, but some people become servants of time.
  What kind of association and thinking did this sentence arouse in you? Please write an article.
  Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the concept, clarify the style, draw up the title by yourself; do not copy, do not plagiarize; do not disclose personal information; no less than 800 words.

Use ChatGPT to write a Chinese composition for the 2023 college entrance examination——National Grade A

How is ChatGPT written?

First I will ask ChatGPT questions

Now you are a student who is about to take the college entrance examination, and now you have to write a Chinese composition of about 1000 words. Please use this passage below: "People can better control time due to technological development, but some people have become servants of time." Help me think of 5 topics, and ask the topic to be novel and relevant to the theme. There should be no words within 10 words. punctuation marks

I turned 9 pages, and finally found a more reliable topic among the 45 topics.
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I took a few outrageous topics given by ChatGPT,
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and finally chose the topic of "Time Trap in the Age of Technology". Then I make a request to ChatGPT.

With the title "Time Trap in the Age of Technology", write an essay of no less than 1,000 words. The requirements are as follows: The main text requires key questions at the beginning and end of the essay. The structure of the article is divided into six paragraphs, and the first and last paragraphs are about 40 words. The text should be rich in content, appropriate in words, literary, expressive in sentences, good at using rhetorical techniques, use more idioms, and use 2-3 verses or famous sayings. Do not use adverbs such as "first", "second", "however" at the beginning of each paragraph

The following is the whole article, how many points can you give? Does it look like it was written by a robot?
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Time Trap in the Age of Technology

The development of technology has brought great changes to people's lives. Our lives are surrounded by more and more technological products, so people can better control their time. However, it is worth pondering that although we can use technology to improve efficiency, some people become slaves to time. In this age of technology, can we really escape the trap of time?

Before entering the main text, let us borrow a famous saying from Mencius: "The year is cold, and then the pines and cypresses will wither after they are known." We can illustrate the time trap in the technological age from a microscopic example. Now, many people are obsessed with social media and mobile games, idly swiping screens and fighting monsters all day long. Their time is eaten up by these apps and they can't get out of it. Time slipped away like running water, and they gradually got lost in the ocean of the virtual world.

Correspondingly, there is an aphorism in the idiom that "an inch of gold cannot buy an inch of time", which warns us to cherish every minute and every second. However, the development of technology has given people too many choices, and sometimes we fall into the difficulty of choosing and cannot use time efficiently. For example, the convenience of online shopping gives us endless choices, and we can buy goods from all over the world at home. But at the same time, we are also easily troubled by the temptation of commodities, spend a lot of time on unnecessary choices, and then ignore more meaningful things.

Just as Du Mu wrote in "Autumn Evening": "Silver candles and autumn lights are coldly painted on the screen, and light fans are fluttering fireflies." This poem describes people's sense of disappearing in time, and reminds us to cherish every moment and not be distracted by trifles. bothered by. However, in reality, many people lose themselves because of technological progress and become slaves of time.

The time trap brought to us by technology is not only reflected on the personal level, but also extends to the social level. With the popularization of the Internet, the transmission speed of information is getting faster and faster, and people's life rhythm is getting more and more tense. We are surrounded by work, study and socializing all the time, unable to truly relax and enjoy life. In this fast-paced society, people are driven by the sense of time urgency and cannot really have their own time.

The ancients said: "Time is like an arrow, and the sun and the moon are like a shuttle." This poem expresses the brevity and speed of time. In the age of technology, we should cherish time and not let ourselves fall into the trap of time. You must understand that technology is to better serve human life, not to make us slaves to technology. We must be good at controlling technology, arrange time reasonably, and enrich our lives.

At the end, I borrowed Lu Xun's famous saying: "Don't admire the past, but embrace the future." We should not be bound by technology, but face the future with a positive attitude. Let us use wisdom and courage to face the time trap of the technological age, grasp our own time, and create our own beautiful future.

To sum up, the development of technology has brought us better living conditions, but it may also make us slaves of time. We should look at the time trap in the technology era from a micro and macro perspective, and while cherishing time, we should use technology flexibly and master our own rhythm. Only in this way can we truly get rid of the shackles of time and become the masters of our own time.

Use the same way to get questions to see how Ali's Tongyi Thousand Questions are answered?

1. First of all, I will also assign roles to Tongyi Qianwen.
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Tongyi Qianwen can only generate 5 pages at most, that is, only 25 questions can be generated. In the end, I chose "Game of Technology and Time" as the topic.
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However, each paragraph generated by Tongyi Qianwen adds these adverbs indicating order, which seems too professional. Then I asked him
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. Unfortunately, Tongyi Qianwen did not understand, and the number of words is not enough, only 729 words. Then I went on to correct him
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even more outrageously, this time only 696 characters. It seems that this big data model is still relatively silly. It doesn't matter, let's continue to correct it
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. Well, I give up, because the number of words is not enough at first glance. Compared with ChatGPT, I think Tongyi Qianwen still has a lot of deficiencies that need to be improved, and I may not express it clearly. How many points can you score for this article? Welcome to leave a message in the comment area!

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